In class we have being making a poem about sport. The actions would only take
about 10 seconds. We have also being learning about stanzas. For our success criteria we had to have 2 stanzas. Also we had to have a each verb on a new line.
This is my poem about hockey.
The save
10 seconds hanging on the clock.
The scores are locked on 2.1.
Slipping past the last of the defenders
Into the D
As the colossal pads stick to the socks
Sweat builds up in my socks
Ready's the forehand
Smashes the ball
Places foot
Ready's for a save
Pounces
Bang`
Slap
And then
And then
And then
Ricochets off kicker
Back to the player
The game goes on
Relieved
No hammering
For the moment
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